The feedback was given from everyone in the class, after presenting the draft to them. What they said was crucial as we needed their opinions so that if there are changes we need to make we will fix them. Especially that are demographic is based around teenagers.
Things they said:
One thing that they said was to move the titling in an empty space instead of where the action was happening.
Make the production companies stand out more (have a whole scene).
Use our full names instead of abbreviations.
Make the blood have a higher contrast so that it stands out more.
Adjust the brightness of the scenes so that we are able to see what is happening, as the scenes are too dark.
Make the scene that there is blood dripping off the knife shorter.
Separate the words for example, directed by is above Tahera Alawi instead of them it all on one line.
